Barrel of Monkeys

Where do I begin?
Story:
A while ago Mac and I started making movies and have been doing it ever since.
The End
Seen here is scenes from Indiana Jones and...uh...that stuff (working title). Our identities have been hidden for the sake of privacy from the press.
New Idea for a movie (BIG SCALE)
Plot Points
- 1940's Mobsters a la Damon Runyon
- Old mob boss dance, dancing and singing at funeral (movie starts with song, no dialogue? I like this idea. We could even have credits while the dancing goes on.)
- Dancing at inagural party for new boss. New boss tries to sing and is terrible, however his men are obligated to flatter him. "Never thought of himself as a songboyd"
- See ad for concert of some good-looking singer, they make plans to go.
- Boss singing in the shower. Two of his men walk by saying: "The boss' singing is terrible shall we obtain (possible change) some pizza?" "Yeah, that sounds great" Boss only hears the latter.
- They go to the concert. After words the boss is fired up and declares his intentions of becoming a singer.
- Audition at Charley's for a spot. Charly hates it but is "persuaded" by Boss' men to let him sing.
- Results of first few performances are fixed by Boss' men
- Boss' men get worried and "hire" good-looking singer to give Boss voice lessons.
- She never tells him how bad he is. Tries once but Boss is too offended to even consider it.
- Romance envelops the characters but Boss-guy gets nervous when signs of it come up.
- He becomes good and the one night the results of audience aren't fixed, the audience loves him for real.
- He likes it but sees the piano player jammin' and decides he wants to ditch singing for piano playing.
- THE END
- Credits
- Black screen
- Theatres empty
- People drive home
- Maybe get something to eat
- Go to sleep
- Wake up
- Go to work
- Etc.
Well Mac, whaddaya think? I feel like I'm a nerd trying to carry too much stuff at once and it's going to fall any minute. It's a lot to swallow so if you could help me, I might not fall over. Whatever that means.
Bye bye!
